I forgot to mention there will be 5 stories in this series like for ex: 1 Episode story 1 Episode 2 story 2 Stuff like that But without further A DO BC HIGH! ------------------------------- August 30 First day of school BC High School Craftifornia Principle Fan: Welcome back students and new students to BC High School we would like for you to listen to the announcements so you know where to go and what to do but first we will have a special student sing Pengerica's National Anthem.. So give a round of applause to... TNTMAN!!! TNT: COGUH AHEM COUGH- O say can you see, by the dawn’s early light, What so proudly we hail’d at the twilight’s last gleaming, Whose broad stripes and bright stars through the perilous fight O’er the ramparts we watch’d were so gallantly streaming? And the rocket’s red glare, the bombs bursting in air, Gave proof through the night that our flag was still there, O say does that star-spangled banner yet wave O’er the land of the free and the home of the brave? On the shore dimly seen through the mists of the deep Where the foe’s haughty host in dread silence reposes, What is that which the breeze, o’er the towering steep, As it fitfully blows, half conceals, half discloses? Now it catches the gleam of the morning’s first beam, In full glory reflected now shines in the stream, ’Tis the star-spangled banner - O long may it wave O’er the land of the free and the home of the brave! And where is that band who so vauntingly swore, That the havoc of war and the battle’s confusion A home and a Country should leave us no more? Their blood has wash’d out their foul footstep’s pollution. No refuge could save the hireling and slave From the terror of flight or the gloom of the grave, And the star-spangled banner in triumph doth wave O’er the land of the free and the home of the brave. O thus be it ever when freemen shall stand Between their lov’d home and the war’s desolation! Blest with vict’ry and peace may the heav’n rescued land Praise the power that hath made and preserv’d us a nation! Then conquer we must, when our cause it is just, And this be our motto - “In God is our trust,” And the star-spangled banner in triumph shall wave O’er the land of the free and the home of the brave. Principle Fan: Thank you TNT but that's for America not Pengerica TNT: Crap Principle Fan: Now students we have to cover a few rules 1) No saying "WHAT ARE THOSE" to any students/teachers 2) We do not tolerate bullying any bullying on school grounds will cause for you to spend the rest of the day in DETENTION 3) No gum 4) No pranks 5) No interrupting teachers Basically all rules you should all know by now Dry: psst Jeremy we should like put a firecracker in the Principles bathroom Jeremy: Hehe yea I'll go distract him Dry: Okay lets do this -Jeremy starts running to distract the principle but runs into Miss Dusty- Dusty: Jeremy H. Clarkson running in the halls IS NOT PERMITTED this is not a good way to start a new year Jeremy: The principle didn't say we cant run in the halls Dusty: But I did! Jeremy: Yes mam... -The Bell rings- Dusty: Head to class -Jeremy and the other kids walk to their first class- Chip: Bienvenidos clase Bien a la clase de matemáticas Chip: Just kidding this isn't Spanish class its Math Sud: Great.. Word: Psst Sud isn't she hot? Sud: Your disgusting word shes our teacher... CJ: Yea Word you should know better Word: ... Butter: Mmmhmmm Chip: Okay class starting our lesson we would like to introduce some new students! Chip: Give a big good morning to... Chip: Remmi! Napkin! AND MINER Chip: Noones saying good morning? K Miner: Great I'm in a class full of bimbos and idiots Napkin: I'm here Miner Miner: Exactly -Suddenly the door opens- Sud: Um whos that? Chip: My god its.. ???: IM OUTTA PRISON! ???: AND ???: ITS ???: BINS
Eh. It seems a bit all over the place and the mystery person's appearance seemed a bit forced. I would recommend not combining multiple themes into one episode, for example, maybe wait over time for a big character reveal, with a rising backstory of the figure without revealing a name.