Yva's Titleless Story

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  1. yvagary

    yvagary Well-Known Member Penguin Retired Staff

    Alright so I'm writing this on my phone because I'm home sick and not allowed on my comp SO ANYWHO I've been meaning to write a story in Google Docs or Wattpad but it's an extremely short story and I'm preoccupied with something on my Google Docs. So let's get started, shall we?

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    I wake up at the sound of shuffling feet and the falling of paper. "Jenny?" I ask, confused on what she's doing.
    Turning on the light, I notice something different about her. Not the fact that she's shivering and is a bit zoned out, but her facial features. Something's... different.
    "Jenny, are you okay?" I try to get her attention. She won't even look at me. "Jen?"
    It's her eyes. They're not green anymore. They're a silvery-white. What?
    She blinks a few times, and her eyes are green again. "Shit..."
    "Jen?"
    "Andrew, you need to call someone."
    "What?"
    "The lab! Call the lab!" She screams. "You're not safe anymore."
    Dialling the lab, I throw aside any thoughts of what's happening to her. "Hello?"
    "Hi."
    "What's wrong, Drew?"
    "There's something wrong with Jen."
    "Like what?"
    "Her eyes."
    "Shit dude you need to get her over here. Fast. She could potentially kill you."
    "Are you joking?"
    "I don't joke."
    Jen gets up and starts walking to the door, but she's a bit clumsy about it. I hang up and open the door for her. She heads for the car as I grab the keys.
    ~
    magical time skip
    ~
    "Put her in there," Elliot, one of the scientists, say to a boy off to the side. "We'll need test subjects. Not as in Jen. As in someone to fight Jen."
    "
    Don't hurt her!" I yell.
    "Her? Oh hell no there is no way those people will stand a chance next to her. We'll be lucky if they're still alive after the test."
    "What the hell?"
    "She's deadly."
    "H-"
    "You're the third test subject just for questioning me. I mean, you were going to be anyway but you have to shut up my God."
    I look out of the one-way glass. Jen's sitting in the one corner twirling her hair. She awaits the first test subject.
    "Ready Jenny?" Elliot asks through the speaker. She nods, and the door opens.
    Her eyes turn silver again.
    The man walks up to her, slowly but surely. When he reaches her, he slaps her across the face really hard. Her eyes change to red.
    "Dude he's so fucked."
    Jen gets up and starts pushing him backwards. She swings her arm up and punches his right cheek. He stumbles back, trying not to engage. She kicks out his legs and slides him back. The man gets up and scrambles to the doorknob. He's out.
    Jenny's eyes change back to green. She's at the brink of tears. Another test subject walks in. It's a girl.
    "I don't want to hurt you." Jen says, looking at the girl.
    "I actually fight back."
    Jen's eyes turn silver again. "Go!" Elliot yells into the mic. She punches her shoulder lightly, just enough to trigger her. Red.
    Jen grabs the girl's arms and knees her in the stomach. The girl twists her arms around and pushes her down with her foot. Jen grabs her foot and flings her down. She hits her head on the floor pretty hard, but she gets back up anyway. Jen throws a few punches, but the girl blocks them. Jen's had enough.
    She hits the girl's head on both sides. On the floor, the girl's dragged out of the room.
    It's my turn.
    I walk in, closing the door lightly behind me.
    "Andrew, no."
    "I have to."
    "I don't want to hurt you."
    "I don't exactly care."
    "Andrew, please," she says as she starts to cry. I walk over to her and kiss her forhead. She's shivering again. I pull away, and her eyes are silver again.
    I punch her shoulder lightly, and it just barely triggers her. Red. She throws her first punch, but she starts screaming. Her opposite arm grabs the one that's an inch from my face. Her legs are wobbling. She's fighting herself. "I won't hurt you!" She yells.
    Her knees sink to the ground, and she's still screaming. The clenched fist opens and cups her ear, same with the other hand. Her eyes keep flipping between colors. She can't control it. Not like she could anyway.
    "Jenny!" I yell over her screams. It stops.
    "Drew, I think you did it." Elliot says.
    "Did what?"
    "You got her to fight herself. It's over."
    Jen's not moving.
    "Jenny?"

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    HAHA okay so I know I suck at English grammer but like I've been laying in bed trying to find a comfortable position while writing this so chill out. I know I repeated "I, he, she, her, Jen, Jenny, and the girl" a lot but deal with it. I'll edit this as I please eventually so I'll probably say something on my profile about it. I hope you liked it:)
     
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  2. Jessie

    Jessie Ex-Ownerbear Retired Staff

    10/10 would read again.
     
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  3. yvagary

    yvagary Well-Known Member Penguin Retired Staff

    ehe
     
  4. Jessie

    Jessie Ex-Ownerbear Retired Staff

    Syke.

    JK ILY
     
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  5. yvagary

    yvagary Well-Known Member Penguin Retired Staff

    oh i'll just
    i'll just
    ;c
     
  6. NapkinDabber

    NapkinDabber Well-Known Member Retired Staff

    The critics in the literature industry... Smh
     
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  7. yvagary

    yvagary Well-Known Member Penguin Retired Staff

    ikr
     
  8. LordN826

    LordN826 Well-Known Member

    This was actually really good and I'm not one for reading stories.
     
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  9. HestiaMinecraft

    HestiaMinecraft Well-Known Member Retired Staff

    It's sounds really interesting! 10,000/10: awesome book ;)
     
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  10. TNTMan1289

    TNTMan1289 Guest

    WHAT HAPPENED TO JENNY?!?!? D:
     
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  11. yvagary

    yvagary Well-Known Member Penguin Retired Staff

    muahaha

    I just saw this again like damn yo i love my own story
    Yes I necroposted on my own post
    Yes I doubleposted on my own post
     
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  12. NapkinDabber

    NapkinDabber Well-Known Member Retired Staff

    That's craaaazy
     
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  13. yvagary

    yvagary Well-Known Member Penguin Retired Staff

    for anyone who remembers this story - I'm rewriting it for a project in my creative writing class so stay tuned!
     
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  14. LordN826

    LordN826 Well-Known Member

    That's pretty lit
     
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  15. yvagary

    yvagary Well-Known Member Penguin Retired Staff

    :)
     

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