Darkness Lookout floor 1

Discussion in 'Stories' started by Mike, Jun 14, 2015.

  1. Mike

    Mike New Member

    You walk down a long narrow road, as you get closer the land gets swampier. Eventually its hard to find out where the path is. As you continue to walk down the floor, you see the hotel. It has a pretty misty atmosphere, overgrown with swampland. Their were vines, hanging off the walls of the hotel. As you walk inside, you get a tense feel in your stomach. You check in, the lady behind the counter seemed nice. As you walk into your room in the corner of your eye you see a child looking at you from behind the window, outside. You splash your eyes with water. Then look outside, you see what looks to be a memorial, hmm? You rub it off, and go to sleep. Once you wake up, your bored. You decide to look around the other rooms to find someone to play with, even the vacant rooms. Strangely, some of the vacant rooms had marks on them. As if someone had been there recently. In fact when you were in one of the rooms you heard giggling coming from one of the vacant rooms. As you find out everyone is gone for some reason, the hair on the back of your neck starts to stand up. You go into the kids room which hasn't been used in years, because your bored, and find a old journal, inside it says "Me, Lucy, Jessy and Carl are staying here for a bit. Its kind of scary here. Our parents dropped us off here two weeks ago. We sometimes hear screams coming from the basement, getting more repetitive each day... We can't help are curiosity... We are going into the basement. Hopefully the owners don't catch us." You decide to go into the play room. You find tons of toys with their names on them. Its weird that they'd just leave them here like that. I don't think they'd forgot about them. You decide to go more into this and look behind the counter, and the old filing room for more info. You find a old news report behind the counter of the check in. It says kids Lucy, Matty, Jessy and Carl all disappeared at this hotel. They just disappeared without a trace, and a memorial of them was placed outside. Then you go to the old filing cabinet, and find out they did in fact live here, it looks like the rest of the page was ripped out. Then you find out, coming to the hotel to find their children missing. The parents jumped off the hotel because they couldn't take it anymore. You ask some of the employees, one of the maids says "I've been experiencing tons of things! Once I put the bedsheets on a bed. Then when I left, I heard giggling coming from inside. I went in, to find the bedsheets took off the bed. I was terrified!" That was it, you had to find the answer.
    You slowly walk into the basement. You walk down the steps, and are immediately greeted with the bodies of 4 child sized skeletons, inside a cell. It looks like the basement was used as a dungeon, however their was another door. Leading to an old office. Their you find a journal titled "Journal Entry 17: I am keeping this secret from the public... The only reason I bought this place was because it had a swampy theme, Far from civilization... Now I realize that wasn't the reason the previous owner bought it. Now, I don't think this place is haunted. I know its haunted! I saw human remains in the dungeon... I see children staring at me through the windows... I've also seen doors opening and closing...
    <This is based on a plot I have. Feel free to teleport to me while I'm inside it>
    Feel free to rate this story. Also I am letting people make floors on my hotel with their own mystery. However each one does have some rules.
     
    Last edited: Jun 15, 2015
  2. TheREALPyroYT

    TheREALPyroYT Member

    mike y did you ban me from it. srsly
     
  3. Mike

    Mike New Member

    I've never banned you from it. I don't even know who you are, I've only removed people. If your Freddy, its because you placed invisible blocks and made alot of signs, plus broke some glass. Oh yeah also, you lied to me. You acted like you didn't know anything and you where innocent when you were confronted about it. However Razer confirmed you were the one who did it, this isn't personal.
     
    Last edited: Jun 15, 2015
  4. TheREALPyroYT

    TheREALPyroYT Member

    ? when did u ask me if I did it? plus I was trying to make it look scarier...
     
  5. Mike

    Mike New Member

    Well first of all, making it scarier shouldn't include, making random signs saying HAUNTED HAUNTED HAUNTED HAUNTED HAUNTED! Also, what about the invisible walls, all it'd do is make you go like what? . And, I don't need to even tell you, since you just admitted to it. But I did ask you when I was making this post, and you responded with "?"
    ? <Wow this invisible wall is so annoying ermegherd>
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    And the Random signs...
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    I'd understand if this was a place for crazy people... But this is only for ghosts on this floor. Maybe on another floor you could put those signs. Other then that, I don't see any reason for sane people to be putting random signs everywhere.

    Anyway, I'll add you back. Just please don't make invisible walls.
    Also I have no idea why you deleted the computer Word made for me, and then said all my accounts were hacked.
     
    Last edited: Jun 15, 2015
  6. TheREALPyroYT

    TheREALPyroYT Member

    ? I don't understand
     

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