The Red Chapters

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  1. HoundofNimbus

    HoundofNimbus Well-Known Member

    Chapter 1
    Waking up

    "Am I dead?" I thought
    I woke up and found my entire crew had drowned
    I swam up to shore terrified and scared of what killed them
    And how I survived.
    I see it a tail fin go up in a blink of an eye
    I am scared
    "Is that what killed them?" I thought
    I back up not looking behind me and I fall into a cave
    My back hurts
    I lay against the cold stone wall and think
    "Is this my end?"
    I close my eyes and dream
    And when I wake up I realize its not a dream
    I grab some coal from a nearby ore vein it had fallen out
    I grab 2 sticks and start a fire
    Its snowing
    I go outside to hunt for food
    I grab a rock and a stick
    I smash the rock a few times to make it sharper
    I look across the horizon and see a chest had swam to shore
    Inside I find a bow and arrows and a rope
    I tie the stick and rock together with the rope to make a spear
    I fix the bow string with some leftover rope
    There I see a sheep
    I shoot it in the head
    I run to it and shear it so I can get some warmth
    I drag the body into the cave and cook it
    I chew the mutton until I hit the bones
    I stop eating and lay against the stone with a wool blanket
    I miss my family.
    Suddenly
    I see something
    a shadow
    ITS
    ITS....

    End of Chapter 1
     
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  2. Bins

    Bins Well-Known Member

    Nice!
     
  3. marx2294

    marx2294 Active Member Penguin

    well... im dead arnt i?
     

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