Hawaii: The Lost Islands PREVIEW

Discussion in 'Stories' started by CJR329, Feb 8, 2016.

  1. CJR329

    CJR329 Well-Known Member

    Victoria and her best friends Benjamin, James, and Joshua(I had the name before I met word) are going on a vacation to Hawaii with Dr. Wournos, Benjamin's father. After a boring plane ride they finally make it to beautiful big island of Hawaii, they settle down in the town Hilo. They were all exhausted from the long plane ride so they decided just to get to there hotel and get to sleep. They woke up the next beautiful morning and headed to the beach that was behind their hotel. Victoria and Dr. Wournos were relaxing on the beach as all the boys where snorkeling in the water. It was calm and beautiful. Just as Victoria was falling asleep in her beach chair, the ground started shaking, everyone started to scream and run. The boys rushed out of the water to see what was happening. They decided to follow the crowd of running people to get to high ground in case of a tsunami that could come they get to the top of a hill with a crowd of people. Victoria looked around and had realized she had lost her friends in the crowd. She called their names, but received no answer. Soon she heard Benjamin's voice through the screams of people and the lid grumbling of the ground.
    "Victoria! The islands are moving!"
    Victoria looked around to see the other islands. They were moving, all in different directions. And the island Victoria was on was moving toward the dark, blue ocean.


    Opinions and should I continue?
     
  2. Wordguy

    Wordguy Shultz#7997 Staff Member Moderator Penguin

    SURE SURE SURE

    Great story though! I look forward to the rest! :D
     
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  3. DoctaCirno

    DoctaCirno Well-Known Member Retired Staff

    Nice story, you should continue it!
     
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