-Kronis- a Fiction by Marx

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  1. marx2294

    marx2294 Active Member Penguin

    700 years ago, a creature... a mechanical creature... evolved into a living species known as the the Krantoeans. They lived on a planet known as Kanroasi, and their lives were peaceful and advanced. Their whole race was smarter than most living creature and they had a peaceful way of living... all but one. That one was known as Kronis D. Lazulite. He saw bigger things than just peace and prosperity... he saw protection. Over time, Kronis built a massive empire known as the MRSC and protected his home world from danger. He used drones that he made known as the Vectaran Protection Drop Squad (VPDS) and the MRSC Knight program.
    Kronis also saw more in space than he saw back on his planet. So he left. When Kronis left, he did not think that their would be no way in protection Kanroasi, but he did it anyways. On his journeys, he found a small, humble planet, known as Word World. He met several people along the way, but 10 people interested him specifically. They were known as; Word , Cj, Sudaiys, Shadow, Aero, Freddy, Buter, Lea, and Acer.

    Chapter ONE: Part ONE
    Word World

    "I feel very fascinated by this planet... so many beautiful sites and scenes. I never thought to see such a planet as this." Kronis said with an enthusiastic tone in his voice.
    "Well then, that's a good thing. I was hoping to satisfy people with the amazing work that my friends and i did together." The strange replied.
    "AND who might you be?" Kronis questioned.
    "I am Word. i am the founder of this world. and who might you be exactly?" Word replied back with a soft tone in his voice.
    "I'm.... Kronis. I am just a traveler.... I will not be here long so you do not have to worry about me." Kronis replied sharply.
    "Well then, I hope you have a great time being in Word World, and I hope that you and I will meet again" Word said happily.
    "well i best be off, I have to set up my stuff while I'm here." Kronis chuckled.
    Kronis looked around the room to see no one in there. Word just vanished out of no where.
    "Ugh... i think i should lay off the whisky for a while" Kronis groaned.

    TO BE CONTINUED...
     
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  2. johnyman333

    johnyman333 The John Penguin

    But you only mentioned 9...
    Oooooh spooky precursing of what's to come.
    Ooooooh
     
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  3. DoctaCirno

    DoctaCirno Well-Known Member Retired Staff

    Maybe the 10th. person is himself...? :d

    Anyways, nice story c:
     
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  4. HestiaMinecraft

    HestiaMinecraft Well-Known Member Retired Staff

    If that happened that means he would be interested in himself lol
     
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  5. DoctaCirno

    DoctaCirno Well-Known Member Retired Staff

    ik, but y'know, some "Netflix and Jill" is always good :>
     
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  6. marx2294

    marx2294 Active Member Penguin

    Chapter ONE: Part TWO
    Word World/MRSC

    Kronis walked back into the room he was in earlier. He checked around to see if he forgot anything.
    "Well... i think it's safe to say that I'm good here. Although, that Word character did seem strange." Kronis pondered.
    Kronis shrugged and got back to setting things up. He then leaves out into the open, far from the city, to set up his weaponry and mechanical equipment.
    "You know, I don't particularly like weapons. You mind not having any?" Word stated firmly.
    "It's YOU!" Kronis jumped. "I thought you were just my imagination..."
    "No, I am indeed real, as well as my friends and this world. I had to leave quickly to take care of something..."
    Kronis presses a button on his arm. Word hears a loud grind noise. Vectara Stands up and begins planting a large beacon tower to attract the Knight squadron.

    "What.. is that?" Word slowly questioned.
    "That is Vectara... Vectara is a 200 foot tall 90 ton robot of mine used for war purposes. You don't have to worry... she likes you... if she didn't, you would be covered all over the 4 corners of your planet." Kronis chuckled.
    Word cringed for a second and went back to talking.
    "Why exactly do you even have weaponry?" Word questioned.
    "I have protected my planet for 700 centuries... I saw this planet and decided to help out." Kronis said.
    Word looks up and sees a large portal open with a massive space ship slowly crawl out of the strange portal. The ship was black and had lots of firm points and sharp edges to it. The ship also had 4 massive guns on the front pointing towards Word World's crust. In the center of the ship, it had a massive red ring with a hole going straight though the ship itself.

    "What the HECK?!" Word yelled.
    "As i see... my jewel has arrived from 709 lightyears away... I cannot believe it took 42 minutes to get here." Kronis laughed looking at his 'Dead Ringer'.
    "AND what is the purpose of that... THING?!" Word Shouted again.
    "Allow me to explain. This is the jewel of the Adgrelice system this is my ship. The Black knight. for 8000 years I've had this beauty. I don't know why the planet grinders are active or locked onto your planet... I am a bit concerned." Kronis explained.
    "... Planet grinders?" Word questioned after looking at the 4 massive guns.
    "They destroy planets... specifically they cut the planet open and blow it up from the inside and harvest the core for fuel..." Kronis hesitated to say after looking at the expression on Word's face.
    The planet grinders start to glow and Kronis and Word watch as the ship completely obliterates Word World's 2nd moon.
    "Oh God... This cannot be good..." Kronis stuttered. "The ship might be high-jacked..."
    The ship slowly turns around and locks onto Word World.
    "Oh Lord" Kronis gasped.

    TO BE CONTINUED...


     
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  7. TheREALPyroYT

    TheREALPyroYT Member

    Marx please keep doing this series... You are making me addicted to wanting more of it. It is soooo good and I think you should take a profession on writing this stuff seriously bro, keep it up! :):):):):)
     
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  8. HoundofNimbus

    HoundofNimbus Well-Known Member

    Actually the planet is called BuildCraftia but it has at least 9 other planets orbiting it and those are the worlds. For example my world is one of those planets and so is Words. BuildCraftia is the center planet like a bigger Earth. The BuildCraftia galaxy is in the Minecraftia Universe
     
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